Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Thursday. Vegas Skies

Dear blog,
I need a new song to be stuck in my head.

So, presentation just ended; only a few of us presented our animatics though.

I worked hard all night yesterday, actually, tts not true, till about 0330. I would have continued but then I dont have quicktime in my home computer and AVI was doing screwy things on Premiere Pro. Yup.

I got my friend to wake me up at 0830 but I ended up sitting on my bed till 1000. Damn. Haha. Anyway, I went to school and tweaked my timing in Premiere once I exported the Flash file using Quicktime. I didnt have enough time to put in all my sound effects though. I only got in when David was drinking and burping.

There were a few comments about my animatics, k, those that I have to improve on first.
The car should swerve more to the left and right.
David should have saw the police car lights from his review mirror; so the police car is coming from behind.
The cop is (still) too close. (Though I edited this already, heh)
The close up shot of the breathalyzer is too close, should zoom out a bit so people can register what it is.
Too many going back and forth with the cop.
Staging of cop and David weird (The reason why I hadnt change it from my storyboard was because I think it makes sense; should ask around and consult Alan again so I will understand)
Staging where the cop's hand and David's profile is nice.
Cop's hand should pull a bit of the underwear out.
Yay, tts all

So, some things that people have complimented me on my animatic. Amanda saw my road cycle and said it was nice and well done; so did Raj (thanks)
Er...Jarrold and the twins like my drawing style
Oh, I did not model David to look like Alan, haha, though David does start to look like him.

Yeah, k, so need to work a bit more on my animatic and backgrounds and all.

I liked Rachael's animatic and storytelling, well paced and super funny.
Jarrold's narration today was quite funny. Had a good laugh. haha.

Yay, keep going peeps, we can do this. Ugh, some people said the bags under my eyes were a bit puffy today.

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